In this installment of Page 69,
We put Giano Cromley's The Prince of Infinite Space to the test.
Ok Giano, set up page 69 for us:
The page 69 excerpt below is from my novel-in-progress The
Prince of Infinite Space. Our protagonist, Kirby Russo, has never been very
good at figuring out how to get along in the world. He’s seventeen and just
starting his second year at Haverford Military Institute, after law a
law-breaking escapade across Montana (which was the subject of my earlier novel
The Last Good Halloween). At this point, Kirby has finally come to the
realization that no matter how hard he tries, there’s no way he’ll be able to
successfully follow the rules of life. As such, he’s decided his first course
of action is to get himself kicked out of school. This page opens with him
being sent to Dean Yellin’s office, for what Kirby hopes will be his dismissal
from school.
Do you think this page gives our
readers an accurate sense of what the book is about?
This page, though largely taken up by description of the
dean’s office, happens to capture one of the major themes of this novel.
Namely: Is there a way to make peace with the gap between what we hoped we’d
be, and what we actually turn out to be?
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Page 69
The Prince of Infinite Space
On the wall
behind him is a picture of President Bush, smiling in that insecure way he has,
as if to admit that even though he oversaw the fall of communism he secretly
knows he had nothing to do with it. Next to the Bush headshot is a black and
white photo, taken at an odd angle, of two people shaking hands. After twisting
my head to get a better view, I realize it's a very young, possibly idealistic,
version of Dean Yellin shaking hands with a gleaming-toothed JFK.
The 1990
version of Dean Yellin is a paunchy guy with a mop of white hair that's
definitely not military-grade. Rumor has it that, after finishing a tour in
Vietnam, he became an antiwar protester — one of those guys who used to do
sit-ins at administration buildings, before eventually settling down and
acquiring a desk in one. I think that's why he always looks like a guy who's
trying to impress everyone – the lefties and
the righties, as if both of their causes were compromised by his presence here.
"Mr.
Russo," he says without turning from his green-glowing computer screen,
"do you know why I called you here today?"
"I've
got a pretty good idea," I tell him. "But do you know why I'm glad you
called me in here today?"
This
conversational curveball catches him off guard and he finally turns from his
computer to look at me. I can tell he wants to take the bait and ask me why,
but instead he flips open a manila folder on his desk and cocks his head to aim
his bifocals at it. If he had taken the bait, we could have ended this kabuki
dance before it even started.
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Giano Cromley is the author of The Last Good Halloween. He lives in Chicago.
Love the Last Good Halloween. Can't wait for this one to come out!
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